2009年3月30日星期一

Exploration is important for countries

Essay Plan
Introduction:
Thesis Statement:Exploration is important for countries,Because they can improve the international.They have benefited people all over the world.People in our country will not have to worry about resources.
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Topic Sentence:Exploration can improve the international.
Body: Oil is the blood of economic development, social stability and are a prerequisite for national security. Shortage of oil in China's economic development not only affects the health of the rise of international anti-China forces also provided an excuse to curb our country and conditions; competition in the oil so that our country's changing geopolitical security, thus affecting the peaceful rise of China's international environment and surrounding environment.Improve the country's economic level, the International status will be a corresponding increase.
Concluding Sentence: Thus,exploration can improve the international.
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Topic Sentence:Exploration have benefited people all over the world
Body: There are still a majority of other people who believe that space exploration has more advantages. And I agree with those people. Many new products, such as weather and communication satellites, are also products of space programs, and they have benefited people all over the world. And what's more, scientific knowledge about outer space has been acquired by mankind.
Concluding Sentence: Therefore,exploration have benefited people all over the world .
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Topic Sentence:People in our country will not have to worry about resources.
Body: A lot of people are troubled by the financial crisis.They haven't got a good life like before.China Petrochemical Corporation (Sinopec) told Xinhua on Wednesday that the nation's second largest oil field's proven oil reserve was 11.79 percent higher than previously thought to the exploration efforts made by the oil field. It means our country get more resources, China's economy can grow.People's lives will not be disrupted.There is not much troubled for people in our country.
Concluding Sentence: Thus,people in our country will not have to worry about resources.
Conclusion:
Restatement of Thesis:On balance,exploration is important for countries,Because they can improve the international.They have benefited people all over the world.People in our country will not have to worry about resources.

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