2009年4月1日星期三

Exploration is important for countries

Carolyn Shu

Exploration is important for countries
______"Is the bounden duty of people to explore the truth?”- 〔〕 Poland Copernicus. Of human space flight to explore the long history, generation after generation of explorers who have lost their precious lives it. To explore everywhere, always have. Explore the twists and turns in the rough, there is very hardship, but it is a brave human tenacity and perseverance to explore the numerous practice, we created a colorful, rich and varied beauty of the world. Exploration is important for countries, because they can improve the international. They have benefited people all over the world. People in our country will not have to worry about resources.
________Exploration can improve the international. Oil is the blood of economic development, social stability and is a prerequisite for national security. Shortage of oil in China's economic development not only affects the health of the rise of international anti-China forces also provided an excuse to curb our country and conditions; competition in the oil so that our country's changing geopolitical security, thus affecting the peaceful rise of China's international environment and surrounding environment. Improve the country's economic level; the International status will be a corresponding increase. Thus, exploration can improve the international.
_________Exploration has benefited people all over the world. Human beings will always want to explore unknown fields themselves carry forward the spirit of space exploration is the great cause of all mankind, the need for generation after generation of human struggle, sacrifice. Human access to space has just started, in space flight accidents happen people will perish, mankind can not prevent the pace of space exploration, manned space flight should continue to push forward the ... ...There are still a majority of other people who believe that space exploration has more advantages. And I agree with those people. Many new products, such as weather and communication satellites, are also products of space programs, and they have benefited people all over the world. And what's more, scientific knowledge about outer space has been acquired by mankind. Therefore, exploration has benefited people all over the world.
________People in our country will not have to worry about resources. A lot of people are troubled by the financial crisis. They haven't got a good life like before. China Petrochemical Corporation (Sinopec) told Xinhua on Wednesday that the nation's second largest oil field's proven oil reserve was 11.79 percent higher than previously thought to the exploration efforts made by the oil field. It means our country get more resources, China's economy can grow. People’s lives will not be disrupted. There is not much troubled for people in our country. Thus, people in our country will not have to worry about resources.
________On balance, exploration is important for countries, because they can improve the international. They have benefited people all over the world. People in our country will not have to worry about resources. Explore it, young people! Let's forge ahead to create footprint Synthesis of the symphony, so that the hard sweat of the time depicts Fairview. Let us put the spade work to insert the Republic of the vast plow soil to build a civilization auspicious, prosperous and powerful new China it!

3 条评论:

  1. Thanks for completing your homework!

    Remember to use more of your own words if you want to get a higher mark.

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  2. I'm sorry~~~I'm ill last day~

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  3. Dear Carolyn,

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    I don't know how to mark this. I don't want to give it a zero.

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    If you are ill, you need to talk to me.
    If you don't understand, you need to talk to me.
    If you need help, you need to talk to me.

    I NEED YOU TO TALK TO ME before the essay is due. Don't wait for me to mark it and then tell you. Does that make sense? I really want you to get a good mark.

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