2009年5月12日星期二

When you are finished your poem.

व्हेन यू१. एक्स्प्लें एकाच लितेरारी डिवाइस यू उसेद इन यूर पोएम (यू शौल्ड हवे ५ दिफ्फेरेंत एक्साम्प्लेस).

అ. వాట్ ఇస్ ది లితెరర్య్ డేవిస్?

బ. వాట్ ఇస్ ది ఎక్షమ్ప్లె ఫ్రొం యువర్ పోఎం?

చ. వై దిద యు ఉస్ ఇట్ (క్రేఅతే మూడ్? క్రేఅతే తోనే? క్రేఅతే ర్హ్య్తం? క్రేఅతే మేఅనింగ్?)ఉస్ ౩-౫ సేన్తెన్సుస్ తో ఎక్ష్ప్లైన్ ది ఎక్షమ్ప్లె.

simile-"As the goddess of the base edge"

The Aurora is the picture most want to describe.Also,my peom said "The blessings of the goddess".It is also describe the aurora.I used simile to describe what it look like.

Imagery-"music box"

I think everyone's life like a song.When the music finished,the people will die.The music box can make a beautiful song.

personification-"The sweep of the horizon."

A light cannot sweep like a person.I used personification to creat the light is like a person who give the land blessings.It can create a feeling that the goddess is coming.

repetition-"The blessings of the goddess,Across the horizon "

I want to readers konw the thesis about the poem.I created a strong emotion by the repetition.It give readers a strong feeling that goddess guard the land.

Alliteraion-"The future will always flow out"

It is the end of my poem.It is represent the goddess guard the land,the people here will have a good life in the future.The country will continue develop and better and better.Every one here will very share the happness and peace.

2. Using 12-15 sentences, explain the insightful and mature meaning of your poem.THINK DEEP AND THINK DEEPER!

The peom is I am full of the blessing of a deep piece of land.When I look at the picture,I see the light,that make me think about many fairy tale.It looks like a goddess's benediction in my mind.The land is very peace I konw.It also printe the atmosphere.It create a little the myth of color.Altough it describe about the night,readers can also feel the bright it is.The will not afraid of dark night.It is clear to see that this poem seems very quiet.As goddess of the general, of this piece of land softly on the blessing of mankind shed.In the climax,I used the repetition to create it.

3. What is your poem about?

4. How do you represent the Canadian landscape in your poem? Use 3-5 sentences.

5. Imagine you are an explorer and sent this poem to your King or Queen, how would they feel about the Canadian landscape?

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